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Monday, May 6, 2013

Element (Revised) Chapter One- Escape


23rd of July in the year 5046, 42 years following the great Separation. Patrick, chief royal scribe to his Majesty the Ivory King.
The following records the journey of Rebekah of Learning as she traversed the perilous path to the great Kingdom of Ivory, as told by Rebekah and her companion.

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My name is Rebekah, and this is the story of how I escaped from slavery in the Kingdom of Learning.
But what was the cost of my freedom? Was it worth the loss of a dear friend? Is one life worth another?
This is what I ask myself; what motivates me. Why I will go back to free the one who was taken so that I could get away.

There are four kingdoms in the land of Element which used to live in peace with each other. Ebony in the south supplying metals for building, Ivory, the white kingdom in the north supplying water and silver for trading, the kingdom of Learning, the smallest of the four, which supplied the knowledge of Element, and the Rainbow Valley kingdom, the biggest kingdom to the west Snake Forest supplied the rest.  What lies to the east, no one knows. It is said to be nothing but desert stretching out to the far eastern edge of the world.  The four Kingdoms once lived in harmony, until a time came when the dark king of Ebony decided that a supreme ruler of Element should be appointed.  The selfish king sought to claim the right to rule the four kingdoms, but the others wouldn’t have it. The Patriarchs of Learning and Ebony, in their arrogance, attempted to overthrow the northern and western kingdoms.  Wars were fought; many lives were lost; much blood was spilt.  A dam was constructed in order to cease the flow of fresh water, and in his rage, the Ebony king was said to have released hundreds of his dark and terrible minions to wreak havoc in the Rainbow Valley.  And so the Separation. Now our kingdoms live apart from one another.  Ebony and Learning, the crafty and the prideful, remain allies to this day, while the shining Ebony and the colorful Rainbow Valley live in peace, cut off from the southern terrors.

Right at this moment, thousands of men and women, girls and boys, are withering away in the intense heat of the desert sun, and here I sit in a sparkling marble palace in the midst of a shimmering lake surrounded by soft green grass, absolutely helpless and unable to go to their aid.

I once lived in the place, where all of the houses looked like giant books standing on their edges, and they surround a huge palace that looked very much like a library. The ground in this place was all sand and rock, the only plant life was a dull green forest to the west of the city. The people of this city live in fear of the forest, and the realms that surround our little kingdom. Rumors of poisonous snakes, dark powers, and creatures that can suck the color out of your body as if it is the very blood in your veins are whispered in the houses and the hallways of the palace. Of course, these were only old wives tales told to scare the citizens into staying within the city. Either way, entering the forest is forbidden.

I lived in cramped quarters in the lowest part of the palace with all of the other girls ages ten and up. I was a slave, forced to work my fingers to the bone so that my family, who I hardly even remember, could have food each day. I worked in the Palace of Knowledge, so named because all of the “Knowledge” of the land of Element is kept in the library that takes up more than half of the palace in the form of millions of books. All of the slaves there are females, taken from the poorer families (which are most of them) at the age of ten in order to work for their family’s sustenance. The king tells us that it is an honor to sacrifice our lives to feed our families. I suppose that is true, except… I never saw his daughters working for their food.

The boys have it differently. When they turn ten, they are taken to be trained for guard duty. When they turn eighteen, more than half of them are shipped off to fight in the war that is raging in the dark kingdom of Ebony which lies to the south. Most never return.
This is how my journey begins.

 The heat was almost unbearable. The hem of my dress swirled the dust into my eyes, and the itchy dull grey fabric clung to my skin, but I couldn’t even wipe the sweat from my forehead, because my hands were full. It rolled in great salty droplets down my cheeks and nose.
The sun was shining in a clear blue-grey sky, but I wouldn’t have known. We hardly ever saw the sky, except on very hot days when the guards would open the ceiling windows so that the younger children wouldn’t faint from the heat. Of course this day wasn’t one of those days. It wasn’t hot enough to open the windows, but just hot enough to make us sweat uncomfortably in the long grey dresses that all slaves had to wear. At least I got to work alongside my best friend every day. The law said that we had to be paired with another girl when we first arrived at the palace. I was paired with Jenna, and we quickly became the best of friends.
She and I were assigned to work for one of the king’s daughters. He had seven daughters and five sons, and they hardly work a day in their lives. This particular girl’s name was Ursula, and she was his youngest daughter. When she wasn’t giving us some meaningless task that we had to do no matter how ridiculous, she was blathering on about the goings on in the kingdom, or about her newest love interest. The heat of the day meant that our main task was keeping her majesty cool. This meant that one of us consistently had to fan her with large paper fans, not even stopping to rest our burning arms, while the other ran back and forth to the kitchen to fetch whatever cool refreshment happened to pop into her head. We were to do all tasks without complaint or even a word, because slaves were forbidden to speak in the presence of the royal family. She was just saying something about the new set of guards that had arrived in the palace the week before, when Jenna came back from her fifth trip to the kitchen, holding the latest refreshment, lime flavored ice sweetened with white sugar. I scowled when I saw it, knowing that the people were starving and without relief from the harsh sun, while this princess binged on one of the rarest delicacies in the kingdom.
“Oh, if only I were fifteen again!” She wined, her ugly face pinched in an attempt to look pouty. “I swear they get taller and more handsome every year!”
I rolled my eyes as Jenna smirked and winked at me. With a toss of her long hair and a sarcastic flourish, she placed the dessert in front of our lady.
Ursula pursed her lips as Jenna flashed a bright smile. Who wouldn’t be a little jealous of Jenna’s beauty? With her bright blue eyes and waist-length light brown hair, she was one of the most beautiful girls in the kingdom. Even I find myself envying her good looks. Despite being fed barely enough to keep us alive, I’ve always had a more round figure, and there is no great beauty in my face. And my short, dark hair hardly compares to
Jenna’s velvety locks.
“Ah!” Ursula exclaimed, “Just what I wanted!”
It was Jenna’s turn to roll her eyes.
“Well girls,” She said with her mouth full of lime ice. “I think that’s all I’ll want from you today. You may go.”
Jenna’s shocked expression mirrored my own as I looked at her.
“Oh girls,” she said seeing our surprised faces, “it WILL be dark in an hour, and the heat will go away when the sun does. I won’t need you anymore.”
We didn’t argue, and we didn’t stick around for her to change her mind. Out in the hallway, my anger boiled hotter than the air.
“That spoiled, pompous- Deviling fiend-” I grumbled as I mopped my face with my sleeves.
“If I was allowed to speak to her, I would…I would-”
Jenna placed a calming hand on my arm.
“You shouldn’t be angry with her, Beck. She was raised to believe that she deserves everything and that we are meant to give it all to her.”
Jenna is the wisest person I know.
“Besides,” She continued, “We should be honored to-”
“Oh please.” I said cutting her off.
“Rebekah, think about it.” She said reassuringly. “To be able to earn the right to feed our families-“
“Just stop! Come on Jen, it’s hot and I’m in no mood to argue about honor. And besides, what family do I have? A real family wouldn’t have let them take me away.”
She sighed, but gave in and we walked to our quarters in silence. We travelled through the long grey hallways which wove through the center of the palace, and passed by the huge mahogany doors which led to the great library, which was also the throne room where the king sat. We came this way twice every day, but as we walked quietly by, the doors burst open making both of us jump and a tall thin woman with curly red hair and a frustrated demeanor rushed out. It was Catherine. She was the only royal who was against the fact that the kingdom tolerated slavery. She was also a founder of the Ivory King’s secret Counsel, despite the fact that it had been forbidden to even speak of the northern kingdom since the war that broke our alliance with the Ivory and Rainbow
Valley Kingdoms. If anyone found out, she would be executed immediately, king’s daughter or not. Of course,
Catherine was good at keeping things from her father, like her secret friendship with Jenna and I, and her efforts to help us escape from that horrible place.
Her frustration melted away when she spotted us.
“Ah! I was just about to come and find you!” She said with quiet excitement. “I have news for you. Come; let’s go to a more private spot so that we can speak.”
We walked through the halls, carefully avoiding guards along the way, and finally slipped into our “secret room.” It was really just an old, unused bedroom, but we turned it into a sort of safe house, and the only place where we could speak freely to each other, despite the law against it. We sat facing each other on the old rug that covered the floor, and Catherine proceeded to tell us her news.
“I may have discovered an escape route.”
My heart leapt at her words. Jenna tilted her head curiously.
“What is it this time? Will it be dangerous?” She asked.
“There is a man, an agent of the Ivory King who lives deep in Snake Forest. If you can get to him, he can take you to the entrance to Rainbow Valley. From there, you can easily make your way to the Ivory City.”
She went on to explain how we might be able to get into the forest, but I could hardly hear one word. My mind was racing a mile a minute. The possibility of escape was simply too much.
“Whatever it is,” I interrupted. “I’ll do it if it gets me out of this place.”
She nodded. “I thought as much. It WILL be dangerous. Jenna, are you in?”
We both looked at her. She seemed deep in thought with her long hair making a curtain that hid her beautiful face.
“Is this really wise? Should we attempt it?” She whispered.
“Jenna, this is our way out!” I said. “You said that if we found a way, we would take it!”
“I did say that yes, but if it’s as dangerous as Catherine is saying, maybe we should wait for a safer way.”
“Jenna, this is the first time that freedom has been a possibility since the king started using young girls as slaves.
You two are the only ones who are brave enough to even think of it.” Catherine explained. “There won’t be another way.”
“Well then,” She said after a moment. “If Rebekah is set on going, then I’m in.”
“Excellent. We’ll have to move quickly. We only have one shot at this. I only just managed to convince my father to give the forest guards the night off. I had to explain to him that everyone is too afraid of the forest to go anywhere close to it, so why guard it every single day? Even then he only agreed to give them one day and a night.
It’s a wonder those men don’t die from the heat.”
Jenna’s fingered the hem of her dress as she pondered this.
“It seems very sudden.” She said thoughtfully. “Shouldn’t we have taken the time to plan this?”
“Why wait?” I said eagerly. “Besides, this seems like the only opportunity we’ve got. A long shot maybe, but we have to go tonight!”
Jenna shot a questioning glace at Catherine.
“Rebekah is right.” She said. “Even if we did wait, there’s no guarantee that I would be able to get my father to give the guards time off for a second time.”
“All right then,” She said after a moment. “We go tonight.”
Catherine smiled. “Good then. There’s no time to waste, so go and prepare your things. You should try to eat something before we go. It’s a long way to the cottage. My father doesn’t know that the cook is on our side, so at dusk, go out through the back door in the kitchen. I’ll make sure it’s unlocked. From there, head straight to the boulder at the edge of the forest and wait for me there. But be cautious!” She warned. “If anyone sees you, all is lost.”
My smile grew into a grin.
“I’ll be there!” I said confidently.
Jenna nodded in agreement.
"I'll see you then." Said Catherine, and she got up and quietly slipped out of the room.

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Back in my quarters, I quickly stuffed my few belongings into a rucksack. I didn’t have much, just an extra grey dress and a locket made out of silver from the Ivory kingdom with a picture of my father and mother inside. I hardly remember them, even now. It had been seven years since I last saw them when the guard came to take me away. I don’t even know why I kept it.
I quietly opened the door and looked out into the empty hallway. All of the other girls were still working, or in the wash room, which was where Jenna was. I knew she was coming, but I just couldn’t wait. I slipped out and started for the kitchen. This was when the royal family and the guards were eating their supper, so the hallways were deserted.
I made my way to the kitchen as quickly and quietly as I could and I managed to slip inside without anyone seeing me. I felt a thrill when I realized that I had just broken the law that said slave girls weren’t allowed outside their quarters during supper. I made my way through the kitchen and past the cook who was pretending to sleep in a chair in the corner. She knew that if she actually saw me, she would have to raise the alarm. When I reached the back door, I paused with my hand on the doorknob. I hadn’t been out of doors since I first arrived here. I took a deep breath and turned the knob. The door opened smoothly on oiled hinges and a blast of warm, fresh air blew into my face.
Oh how good it smelled! I stepped out onto the rocky ground and looked around. The book-shaped houses stood in rows, and curved to the left and right all the way around the city. They were at least three deep all the way around the palace, but around the back there was a large gap through which I could clearly see the boulder and beyond that, Snake Forest. I always wondered why it was called that. I didn’t even know what a snake was! Only that it was to be feared.
I cautiously walked forward, sand and gravel crunching loudly beneath my feet. The dirt paths that were what passed for roads were silent and empty. The sun was just going down, staining the dirt blood red. The faded green of the forest glowed, and the lines of every branch stood out in sharp detail. I still wish I could see what the kingdom looked like before the Separation, when sweet water flowed in from the Ivory kingdom and the city was full of green.
“I’ll see grass again soon.” I said to myself.
For now, I was simply content to be outside. Freedom seemed so close now. The sun sunk slowly below the horizon, and a light breeze came from the west. It smelled of trees and fresh, moist earth. After glancing around to make sure I was alone, I made my way through the gap. The ground sloped gently downward towards the tree line and I saw the large grey boulder which was pointed like an arrow towards the forest. Once I reached the far side, I stopped and leaned against it, breathing in the clean outdoor air.
Each moment felt like an hour, and I felt the air grow cooler as the sun went down. Suddenly I heard a commotion behind me. I peeked around the boulder and saw Catherine running wide-eyed towards the boulder with a group of soldiers chasing after her. I quickly ducked down behind the boulder, but not before she caught sight of me.
“Run!” She screamed. “Run! Go no-“
I heard a shriek, and then nothing. I looked around the corner again and saw guards standing in the light from the kitchen door over a crumpled bloodied figure.  Catherine was unnervingly still, and I knew she must be dead.  Two of the guards broke away from the group and started towards my hiding spot.
“She was yelling at something down here.” One said.
“Yeah, I could have sworn I saw someone.”
“Hey!” A new voice called out.
I heard the guard’s footsteps moving back towards the palace, so I peeked around again.  Jenna stood silhouetted in the kitchen doorway. Our eyes locked for a moment, and she smiled sadly at me.  Just before they reached her,
I thought I saw her silently mouth the word “run.”  Then the guards reached her and she was hidden from view.  I didn’t hesitate.  I ran.  I knew they wouldn’t follow me into the forest, so I ran as hard as I could for the trees, my sandaled feet pounding over the sand.
“Look! There goes another one!” “Get her!” “Don’t let her reach the trees!”
The voices yelled after me, but I didn’t look back. I plunged into the forest, and I ran as far as possible, not even caring in which direction I was headed.  My lungs felt as if they were filled with white hot metal, but I didn’t stop.  Finally when it was too dark to even see anything around me, and the air was hardly even reaching my burning lungs, I tripped and collapsed onto the leaf-strewn ground. Tears flooded my eyes as the events of the day came crashing down on me.
Catherine dead, and my best friend captured or worse.  I curled up into a ball and cried.

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What now?  I couldn’t go back, and without Catherine’s directions, I didn’t know how to move forward.  For the first time, I felt alone.  All of my life, there had always been someone with me.
And now there was no one.
I was alone in a strange place.  The night pressed in around me, but I made no effort to get up or even to move.  I just cried until I had no tears left.
For the rest of the night, I laid where I fell.  I slipped in and out of consciousness, waking only when the visions of
Jenna and Catherine were too much for me.  I kept seeing their faces in my head, screaming at me to run.  And the
expression on Jenna’s beautiful face as the guards surrounded her.
It wasn’t fear.  I was more…acceptance; peace.
I knew that she had sacrificed herself so I could escape.  I decided right then that I would go back, maybe with the help of the Ivory king, and that I would free not only her, but all of the slaves in the Kingdom.  I told myself that I would do whatever it took to free her.

I finally came to myself just as the light started to creep into the forest.  A flood of memories came rushing into my mind.  My eyes stung as they filled with tears.  Something seemed different though.  It wasn’t just the tears, but something else was making my eyes sting.
Smoke; I could smell smoke.  I knew it was smoke because I had often smelled it coming from the kitchen.  But this was a more cheery and inviting smoke.  I sat up slowly and looked around.  I could see nothing but trees in every direction.  I stood and wiped the dirt and tears from my face with my sleeve.  Perhaps it was a campfire, or even the house of the man that I was supposed to meet.  Catherine had said that he lived very deep in the forest, and who knows how far I had run the night before.  I actually started to feel hopeful.
I followed the smoke through the trees, moving faster and faster.  Suddenly, they grey hem of my dress caught on a root, and I fell.  As the ground rushed towards me, I threw my hands out to catch myself.  I cried out as I felt the bone in my wrist crack and a lightning bolt of pain shot up my arm.
Tears began to flow as I sat against a tree and cradled my injured arm close to my body.  I looked around to get my bearings, my eyes still stinging from the pain.  The smell of smoke was still overwhelming, and I knew that I needed to find the source.
Just then, I heard a faint rustling noise above my head.  I leaped to my feet, and spun towards the tree.  Just inches from my face, a pair of huge red eyes stared at me.  The creature was quite possibly the most horrible thing I had ever seen.  Curled endlessly around the tree was what seemed to be a giant, armored worm with an arrow-shaped head like and large red eyes like a cat’s eyes.  The thing’s body was as thick around as my waist, and its armor looked like overlapping coins covering its entire form and it was a mottled brown color that blended perfectly with the bark of the trees and the forest surrounding me.
I stood frozen, unable to move as I stared into the creature’s blood red eyes, my injured wrist throbbing with each heartbeat.  I started as I felt something brush against my ankle.  I slowly looked down and found myself surrounded by those terrible creatures. The one clinging to the tree let out a loud sound that I can only describe as the hissing of a cat. It reared its head back and opened its mouth to reveal razor sharp three inch fangs.  I couldn’t run.  My mind was screaming at me to move, but my body wouldn’t obey, my mouth open in a silent scream.
I saw the creature tense its muscles, preparing to strike, when I heard voice yell, “MOVE!” and a strong arm wrapped around my waist and arms, lifting me completely off the ground.  The creature launched itself at me, closing its jaws in the air exactly where my face had been only a split second before.
The ground flew by underneath me as my savior ran hard and fast.  Each step jarred my wrist, and pain caused my eyes to water.  We stopped abruptly and I was dropped onto the ground.  I cried out as my arm hit the hard dirt, but I quickly rose to my feet.
The woods surrounded us as we stood in a small clearing with a tiny house in the middle.  I saw smoke pouring from the stone chimney and just to my right, bent over with his hands on his knees and breathing hard from the run, was a man.
“How,” he said between gasps, “in the name of all that is good and holy did you end up out here?”

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